Wednesday, December 8, 2010

quiddage writing

La soupers was the business I was in. It was me ,Maddy,Luce and Zia. we made taste tingly soup and soft mouth watering bread .


In one week we made 10,000 snidges or that what I heard. We made lots of money because we had good price and great veg soup.Our prices are : 10 and 20 and 40 singes for bread 10 for a small 20 for a median and 40 for a large. soup s50.We got lots of awesome feed back.

I really enjoy working In or business. It was so amazing.

Wednesday, December 1, 2010

dialoge writing 2

'' I hate you Maddy,'' I yelled as the cold water hit my body, ''you suck,''.
'' But you said not to stop,'' Maddy screams.
'' Okay what ever I say do not stop, okay,''.
'' Okay,'' then the hose turned on.
'' Turn it off turn it off,'' I mutter loudly '' I beg you turn the hose off,''.
'' But you said,''
'' I don't care what I said just turn the damn hose off,'’.

dialoge writing 2

'' I hate you Maddy,'' I yelled as the cold water hit my body, ''you suck,''.
'' But you said not to stop,'' Maddy screams.
'' Okay what ever I say do not stop, okay,''.
'' Okay,'' then the hose turned on.
'' Turn it off turn it off,'' I mutter loudly '' I beg you turn the hose off,''.
'' But you said,''
'' I don't care what I said just turn the damn hose off,'’.

hurdles

Bang! I got in to the finals for hurdles . And this is the story of how I did what I did ...

We got in groups for the the hurdles '' 5 people in a group,'' said Mr Bron ''girls first no time to waste''.
I got in to a group my heart pounding I was so so nervous [ at this time I did not know I was going to get in to the finals] .

On your marks get set good luck go and we were off The bang was so loud it was like a boom louder than any other boom . All I could think about is run jump run jump every time I would jump.

I passed the finish line 2ND and got a lovely light blue rod and was sent back down to race again. On you marks get set go we were off again we did this until we got to the finals.

And thats the story of the girls 10 and 11 year old hurdles races .

Monday, November 29, 2010

speech writing

'' I hate you maddy,'' I yelled as the cold water hit my body '' you suck,''.
'' But you said not to stop,'' Maddy screams.
'' Okay what every I say do not stop, okay,''.
'' Okay,'' then the hose turned on.
'' Turn it off turn it off,'' I matter loudly '' I beg you turn the hose off,''.
'' But you said,''
'' I don't care what I said just turn the damn hose off,''.

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

free writing

I feel sad those poor miners I dont feel like writing becaues All i CAN THINK ABOUT is them in the dark all a lone whee think they are dead will what if they are a live well the chance and so angerrset them but one can hope this makes aother this sad like that man on the wall we role about or the christchurch earthquake. and its also nice to see and hear about whaat the allblack are doing and the rolye family and the nz flag fling half mask but none of this is going to bring them back

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Grapefruit and we want it we can taste the juice running our dry hard toughs. We need a plan something great we say as we sit on the fence something to get the bright yellow juicy fruit on that hot summer’s day.

We sit on the fence with a stick and poke a grapefruit lose and then we get our cup and stick it under the grapefruit and whack it off. just then I slip am I going to fall and drop the grape fruit on to the dark brown moulded leaf covered ground. I fall to the ground and quickly get up and scraper over the wall.

It gets later and the sky turns a dark grey and starts to rain. The grapefruit start to get wet and cold to the touch also the fence gets wet what makes it slippery and we trip and fall, miss step and knock each other the fence.

We don’t give up we climb up the fence and climb to the other side if the people see us we are doomed. We feel like Jews as we just escaped from a death camp and they want to get us.

We duck and roll slip and slide tumble and turn. sullenly there is some one in the window not looking at us but some thing we jump over the fence and sit on the ground we hope that they don’t see us but we must go back over we want the light sweet bright yellow taste grapefruit.

But the woman is getting the washing and knocks one grape

Off and then another one but that one lands on our side we pick it up and run with it when. She went in side we sat on the fence and saw wasted grapefruit on the ground but at lest we have one we juiced it and think

Yum.

Monday, October 18, 2010

some info

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Thomas dekker drug cheat

Sunday, October 17, 2010

There we where standing lost in a dark pine forest me Sam and Jason. well how did we get here It all started with a game of hide and seek go hide and Rex [my dog ] will find you Mun yelled. It was a beautiful day out side bright and sunny warm like honey. Until you play our hide and go seek.


Hide and seek is a fun game for kids 4 5 6 and 7 until you add a 35 kg BLACK AS THE NIGHT dog running after you at great speeds then you deiced if it is scary .

So now you know how we got here this is when is gets bone chilling scary you run for your life as a black demon dog runs as what it feels like 100km you try to escaped and we did. we escaped but faced another problem now we were really really scared, now we are lost .

when you are lost you think you are going to die or someone is going to sell you but what was so bone chillingly scary about us getting lost was something not someone something was looking following us, our every move trying to find us like Nazis try to find a Jew how had escaped .

We saw a hole and hid in it was we safe no, way .

Thursday, October 14, 2010

I look around the room and see colours all different colours and one thing my eyes keep coming back to is a ruby red box clean white dots on it it is foor quiddage and the thing in side it makes my wonder what it is is it food to eat or is it something some one made it has a lid to with a silver brin . a nother thing is a green bag with a face on it and the heads is a bag i wonder what is in side there is a lot of suff on the beach what makes my tummy say yum.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

lots of people
not much time
people taking your costunes
people thowing


We all quickly zoomed to our tiny yellow room where we took off our costunes of bright green and blue .

Every body was going so fast it was like we were all going at 100 mph. faster faster faster then stop we have just bean called to the wing.

We were under a hole lot of pessers to put on a very good show . Our faces bright red our bodys hot and staew droping off from our face. we did not have time to rest because we were always had to be on the wing.

Back and forward we would ran all night long in the black as black as the night in and out of six very different costunes and different colours of the rainbow .

when the night was done there we are stading on the costunes on the floor and thinking how are we ever going to clean this mavouse messy mess up.

Sunday, September 19, 2010

storm

plan
muddy water cats don't like water
big brown water ducks payed us a visit
flooded deep they were cute
playing funny the cats paw prints were as clear as day
cold and warn

writing

It rain a lot, hard and light it was like a water fall .
the ditch in our front yard was lake a meter deep
all the way. The brown mud made the water a cream chocolate brown .
the cats did not like it a bit the cold freezing water as they tryed to cross but the
water was to storg and they would run back in side to the warmth of the house.
But some mad mad kooky crazy brave little animals did like the freezing cold ice water was two ducks to mad mad kooky crazy brave little ducky ducks swimming in our lake of a front yard but they did not stay they went as fast as the came and did not come back.was it me our was it just getting worst.

Monday, September 13, 2010

walt: make tried writing come to life

my first piece of writing

when i was 1 year old my brother Sam would bounce me up and down in a big blue bounces harness Sam was only 2 and a half I use to go up so high . I liked it so much
i would aways go over to it . my teddy's use to like to go on i to i though s o i took them to
it would hang down off the roof like a ape so as you can see i liked it alot.

My new writing

when I was 1 year old my big brother Sam would smarty bounce me up so high that I would not come down for a long time. I would do this in a big bright blue bounces harness. Sam greatly enjoyed doing this ever when he was only 2 and a bit over a half I would bang my hands and giggle because I liked it so much.
I was like a magnet to metal to it I would always want to go on it our be around it. I would sit my pink teddy in the seat and push her up and down and listen to the ball in her belly . It would hang down off the roof like a ape off a tree. And mum didn't have to take me to the park to go on the swing because there was all ready a perfect swing in our living room that no other kid could use and there was no line.
As you can see I miss my big blue bounces harness a lot!


Sunday, September 12, 2010

free writing 11 [anything ]

i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the mooni am going to stell the sun the mlkiy way the what we live in i am going to stell your underwear pant top hat cap mat cat bat rat ball your tall your call your phone your wallet and i am going to stell big and fuffly you.

Sunday, September 5, 2010

free writing 10 [earth quake ]

The person under neath us must have been sad because he made all these people sad that man must have had something that he did not like because he shaked Christchurch a lot or maybe he was dancing . i WOULD HATE TO BE IN A EARTH QUACK earthquake are made because the ground moves in to a better place than what it is now or like i think [opps out of time ]

Wednesday, September 1, 2010

free writing 9 [ anything ]

i like chesee said 4lom as he walked to buy some i like all kinded of chesse but i dont like pink chesse it taste of sea water and if it is not called pink chesee it is called mr sea a sea a sea a rotten sea bread chess and i does not even taste like cheeses it is the wost cheese every and buy the time it is 100000000000 years old it only taste a little bit better and we will and be dead by then!

Sunday, August 29, 2010

Word for word

The boys ran quickly to gosthlyland.

The people ran quickly to home.

The donkeys ran quickly to australia.

The lions ran quickly to prey.

free writing 8 [ any thing ]

now this little 4lom had to friends named 4lome and 4lomer 4lom and his friends loved to play together and had lots of fun . now 4lome said one day lets go to a shop by berry bliss bay but 4lomer had a better idea lets walk along the long long lunch eat bay so they did both they went to berry bliss bay and eat lunch on the long long lunch eat bay it started to get dark to they all went home.

Wednesday, August 25, 2010

free writing 7 [anything]

one day there was a little 4lom this 4lom was only small and went to school they would sing there
a b c and sing 1 to 100 and this litte 4lom lived on the plant nunnar it was a great place to live sand and beachs all arond and every house has a sea frount veiw the house are a hill at the bottom of the hill is sand and a few 100 meter there is the sea 4lom loves nunnar.

Tuesday, August 24, 2010

free writing 6 [anything]

mr hot dog went to eat a freddy dreddy mr creddy hip hip horry teddy weady sand wich and in that freddy dreddy mr creddy hip hip horry teddy weady sand wich was a slice of freddy dreddy and scoop of mr creddy and one hip hop hurry worry from hi hop hippo him self mr hot dog eat his freddy dreddy mr creddy hip hip horry teddy weady sand wich with great words say i love freddy dreddy mr creddy hip hip horry teddy weady sand wich so much he went to buy a new one of freddy dreddy mr creddy hip hip horry teddy weady sand wich supre

Monday, August 23, 2010

free writing 5 [anything]

we won we won we won nettball 7 to 9
i like to win and the people were nice at the end one girl started crying and we did not know why i guess i really dont need to know [my hand is icthy grace get back to the story ] well it was a hard game lots of people started saying go riverdale go riverdale go riverdale go riverdale go riverdale go riverdale go riverdale go riverdale go riverdale it was so werid.

free writing 4 [any thing]

nettball
i like nettball i have played for 3 years and my team names have been futer ferns maddy and luce was in that team there was also riverdale chicks what maddy and lucy were in and this year one what is riverdale kiwis what maddy is not in today we are playing nettball and we are going to win at lesat i hope to and we are playing parkvale school i hope that they are nice because i dont like bad people and i hope they will give us a run for are money that would be good.

Sunday, August 22, 2010

free writing 3 [any thing ]

bog bog dog dog hog hog cog cog tog tog aog aog rog rog yu are you there mr dog foot i like little dog foot hi mr little dog foot mr dog went to a bog with a hog to play tog with a tog but got a rog when he ate a aog. he eh eh eh eh mr dog went to market mr hog went to market the market was in a bog bog bog bog bog the market the market was in a bog was in a bog a cog he did buy.

Tuesday, August 17, 2010

free writing 2 [any thing ]

Hey7 dog how power maddy home today dog went moo hippo dog cow mosse i want to go home moo mr bun hade a stork the storh grow and grow till he was in s;pace my name is grace hey brain
my name is grace a brain says i know and i say i love you a brain says i love you to and me and my brain lives happy ever after maddy maddy maddy maddy maddy maddy maddy maddy is coming home to day i miss maddy and brain miss maddy to i like to dance and my skin taste like skin again maby if i cook my skin and put some salt on it and that would taste yum!

Sunday, August 15, 2010

free writing [anything]

hip hip hip i like things that start with gress i like hippos my skin taste like skin smile to my nana people are srared of me i think our are them just raning a wawy chinck puff look my dog eat a bean kfc race ing car my head to buk to whit dog mike i like cows cat and the hat is cool i like winnie the pooh dogcat mr nice is not nice i want to go home i like jelly beans jelly beans jump cow mr 2 ate some rade pork.

Saturday, July 31, 2010

playz

the 3 mousegatears in
the shoping mall fight
by grace christophers

characters
Mouse 1 zikky, fast mouse
Mouse 2 bikky baking mouse
Mouse 3 mikky snobby shopping mouse
Setting : the 3 mice are sitting around a table eating cheese when a sale ad for mice comes up on the TV mikky wants to go but the others don’t .
Mikky. [ jumping up and down happily ] i want to go i want to go it’s a sale and i want to go.
Bikky. [Standing up ] they are wanting you to go don’t play into their games.
Zikky .yeah only dumb mice go.
Mikky. [Complaining ] drive me there now .
Zikky. [stands up ] mikky is a dumb mouse mikky is a dumb mouse.
Mikky . I am not.
Zikky. Yes you are.
Mikky. i am not.
Zikky. yes you are.
Mikky .i am not.
Bikky . stop it all of you are acting like babies.
Mikky. are not.
Zikky. yeah i will not drive you down there.
Bikky. just do it zikky because she will not stop it remember last when this happened .
Zikky. yeah everybody get in the car.
Mikky. ok .
Setting now in the car bikky starts sing a song.
Bikky .we are the 3 mice how are driving in a car driving in a car driving in a car we are the 3 mice how are driving in a car all day long .
We are hiding for the mall for the mall for the we are hiding for the mall all day.
When. we get there ....
Zikky . be quite we know where we are going and in what so why do you have to sing about it?
Mikky. look the mall .
Bikky. the mall look zikky the mall.
Mikky. i am going to the mouse fashions house first and then the house of clothes.
Bikky . I’m going to go to the mouse baking shop and then the house of cheese because when we get.
Back i am going to make a cheese plate .
Bikky. zikky where are you going .
Zikky. well i will go to the hall of sports and the cracker shack to pick up some crackers .
Setting. they are now in the mall.
Zikky. we will meet here in one hour.
One hour later
Zikky. Does everybody have every thing .
Mikky and bikky. yes .
Zikky. ten lets go home.


The end



Sunday, July 18, 2010

what I didn't do in 27 words

what I didn't do in the holidays in 27 words :
I didn't go to Australia and see a kangaroo
or her giant golden jumping joey . I didn't see a great Grey
kola hugging a a big brown tree .

Tuesday, June 29, 2010

he sentence i have to change: the waves were high. the boat was small
my sentences :
1. the tiny white boat was in so much trouble as the beautiful blue sea started to get into the boat on that cold calico night.
2. slim sliver-boat stated to ferocious rock as it went over the dark dangerous waves.
3. the poor slim sliver-boat look as tiny as an ant as it went over dangerous dark waves.
the poor poor fisherman light went out as they both sailed out of sight.
4. that cold calico night the small sliver boat sailed out of sight.

Wednesday, May 26, 2010

the jumping thing

when i was 1 year old my brother dam would bounce me up and down in a big blue bounces harness Sam was only 2 and a half I use to go up so high . I liked it so much
i would aways go over to it . my teddy's use to like to go on i to i though s o i took them to
it would hang down off the roof like a ape so as you can see i liked it alot

Sunday, May 16, 2010

autumn

Browns and reds yellows and orange levees
falling from the trees covering the ground
like a big carpet that never stops

As you walk upon the crunchy colorful carpet
with the fresh air biting at your neck
and the wind slowly blowing a way the carpet

You feel safe like notting can hurt you
you start to forget all your worry's
and your problems slip away
all you can do as stand and stare
at the beautiful autumn levees

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

his face

his face
his face looks lost like he has seen something bad
bad er they we can every think of . like he's missing but he's right there
his small eye look like they don't blink ever though they do
his face is wrinkled and cracked like he's falling apart
he wear a gray clock and walks a dirt road. his noes is like a upside down t .
his skin color is a light mud
he his a furry blanket a a big gray and white rug this man has lived a life
we can not imagine

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

I hate hills

I hate hills
when you ran up them they feel as steep as the side of a building and have no end
but, as the the saying goes what goes up must come down so on the time when you have to come down you really come down.

faster and and faster till your legs are moving so fast you feel like your are about to fall over
but you don't and your hole body hurts but you keep run.
after you do this a few times all you are thinking is not again when is the ten minutes up.

Monday, May 10, 2010

The jump jam queen

w.a.l.t describe with voice
well Mrs walker really is the queen of jump jam and this is why.
she give every body a chance.
She jumps around the stage like the bouncing blue ball on the bounces ground ever.
her personalty shines though like the sun on a cloudy day
shes so happy bubbly like a kitten
the seniors are so lucky to have her as our teacher
you know when she has giving it her all because she sweats like the rain when it is pouring down.
Mrs walker is a great teacher with kids of her own so she know how to be patient with us.
i have been at this school for 5 years and every year i have done jump jam so she is the best teacher
for the job.