Tuesday, June 29, 2010

he sentence i have to change: the waves were high. the boat was small
my sentences :
1. the tiny white boat was in so much trouble as the beautiful blue sea started to get into the boat on that cold calico night.
2. slim sliver-boat stated to ferocious rock as it went over the dark dangerous waves.
3. the poor slim sliver-boat look as tiny as an ant as it went over dangerous dark waves.
the poor poor fisherman light went out as they both sailed out of sight.
4. that cold calico night the small sliver boat sailed out of sight.

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