lots of people
not much time
people taking your costunes
people thowing


We all quickly zoomed to our tiny yellow room where we took off our costunes of bright green and blue .

Every body was going so fast it was like we were all going at 100 mph. faster faster faster then stop we have just bean called to the wing.

We were under a hole lot of pessers to put on a very good show . Our faces bright red our bodys hot and staew droping off from our face. we did not have time to rest because we were always had to be on the wing.

Back and forward we would ran all night long in the black as black as the night in and out of six very different costunes and different colours of the rainbow .

when the night was done there we are stading on the costunes on the floor and thinking how are we ever going to clean this mavouse messy mess up.

storm

plan
muddy water cats don't like water
big brown water ducks payed us a visit
flooded deep they were cute
playing funny the cats paw prints were as clear as day
cold and warn

writing

It rain a lot, hard and light it was like a water fall .
the ditch in our front yard was lake a meter deep
all the way. The brown mud made the water a cream chocolate brown .
the cats did not like it a bit the cold freezing water as they tryed to cross but the
water was to storg and they would run back in side to the warmth of the house.
But some mad mad kooky crazy brave little animals did like the freezing cold ice water was two ducks to mad mad kooky crazy brave little ducky ducks swimming in our lake of a front yard but they did not stay they went as fast as the came and did not come back.was it me our was it just getting worst.

walt: make tried writing come to life

my first piece of writing

when i was 1 year old my brother Sam would bounce me up and down in a big blue bounces harness Sam was only 2 and a half I use to go up so high . I liked it so much

i would aways go over to it . my teddy's use to like to go on i to i though s o i took them to

it would hang down off the roof like a ape so as you can see i liked it alot.

My new writing

when I was 1 year old my big brother Sam would smarty bounce me up so high that I would not come down for a long time. I would do this in a big bright blue bounces harness. Sam greatly enjoyed doing this ever when he was only 2 and a bit over a half I would bang my hands and giggle because I liked it so much.

I was like a magnet to metal to it I would always want to go on it our be around it. I would sit my pink teddy in the seat and push her up and down and listen to the ball in her belly . It would hang down off the roof like a ape off a tree. And mum didn't have to take me to the park to go on the swing because there was all ready a perfect swing in our living room that no other kid could use and there was no line.

As you can see I miss my big blue bounces harness a lot!

free writing 11 [anything ]

i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the moon i am going to sll the mooni am going to stell the sun the mlkiy way the what we live in i am going to stell your underwear pant top hat cap mat cat bat rat ball your tall your call your phone your wallet and i am going to stell big and fuffly you.

free writing 10 [earth quake ]

The person under neath us must have been sad because he made all these people sad that man must have had something that he did not like because he shaked Christchurch a lot or maybe he was dancing . i WOULD HATE TO BE IN A EARTH QUACK earthquake are made because the ground moves in to a better place than what it is now or like i think [opps out of time ]

free writing 9 [ anything ]

i like chesee said 4lom as he walked to buy some i like all kinded of chesse but i dont like pink chesse it taste of sea water and if it is not called pink chesee it is called mr sea a sea a sea a rotten sea bread chess and i does not even taste like cheeses it is the wost cheese every and buy the time it is 100000000000 years old it only taste a little bit better and we will and be dead by then!