Wednesday, December 1, 2010

dialoge writing 2

'' I hate you Maddy,'' I yelled as the cold water hit my body, ''you suck,''.
'' But you said not to stop,'' Maddy screams.
'' Okay what ever I say do not stop, okay,''.
'' Okay,'' then the hose turned on.
'' Turn it off turn it off,'' I mutter loudly '' I beg you turn the hose off,''.
'' But you said,''
'' I don't care what I said just turn the damn hose off,'’.

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